Writing romance? Please help?

Yeah the typos were something I noticed right away but as long as you know they're there you can fix them. You finish this section off really well but when you start the "love" scene it's a bit awkward, when you start with him holding you (if it is you). I would say move into that slower, a little more dialogue before he starts holding her or make it obvious that it is a friend embrace, otherwise great story!